[b]Steam ID:[/b] STEAM_0:0:143275567 [b]Profile Name:[/b] http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198246816862/ [b]Real Name: [/b] [i]Vincent[/i] [b]Age: [/b] [i]15[/i] [b]Location: [/b] [i]Texas[/i] [b]Time With Community:[/b] [i]I've been with the community for about a week and a half[/i] [b]Time on Server: [/b] [i]A week and a half[/i] [b]Do You Have A Microphone: [/b] [i]Yes[/i] [b]Previous Experience With Moderating:[/b] [i]I have 0 moderating experience on gmod.[/i] [b]Have You Ever Been Kicked/Banned:[/b] [i]I've haven't been kicked so far.[/i] [b]Experience With Coding: I haven't learned enough coding to actualy do codes[/b] [b]Have You Donated:[/b] [i]Possibly in the future but no I haven't donated[/i] [b]Why Should We Accept You:[/b] To keep dissatisfaction a low so players can enjoy they're time in peace [b]Will You Be Responsible:[/b] [i]Yes, I will try my best to give just, unbaised, and right decision.[/i] [b]Any Additional Information: [/b] [i]I would love to be accept as a moderator or anything even just for a little bit Oh and I can play the trombone <3[/i] Please fill out this forum template in a new topic under [i]Staff Applications[/i], thanks and good luck!

[color=#ffd700][size=200]This application is still open, waiting upon other peoples feedback etc.[/size][/color]

[color=#ff0000][b][size=200]-1 I haven't seen you on the server much, but your app lacks info and it looks like you rushed it, if you spend just a bit more time on the servers you might have a chance.[/size][/b][/color]

--- Start off by saying, it wasn't letting me post to this thread so I couldn't actually give any feedback. Hopefully this post will get through, I'll just say the same things as my last one. --- [size=150][color=#ff0000]-1 [/color][color=#ff8c00]When I grab your first and second application and hold them together, to be honest, not much has changed. You've put more words into the 'Yes'  or 'No questions which is unnecessary. When we say "We'd like more detail." We expect you to give 2-3+ reasons and explain them on the 'Why we should accept you.' You haven't done this. On your first app, you used "Yes, I will try my best to give an unbiased justice." on your 'Will you be responsible' question, and you didn't get accepted, mostly because of the fact that your 'Why' you wanted to be staff was so vague and pointless. Regardless, you just converted that exact same unexplained point on your second app, personally, I think your just trying to save yourself a little time and extra effort when you should be putting in time and care into your staff app. If you don't, that just shows that you aren't committed/dedicated/loyal/whatever, you don't care much and you haven't made yourself stand out from other rivals. Furthermore, you gave another unexplained reason for you 'Why' we should accept you, it's a commonplace reason, you need to think outside the box and into your self for why we should accept you. Any person who applies for staff should be doing what your doing, but what we're looking for is that extra oooompf that some players have to offer. I believe that we can find your skills + extra in most other contestants for the position. Finally, you just gave some trivial information for your Additional Info that won't really benefit you in-game, - and if I were going to absolutely demolish this app - you included a sentence from the bottom of the blank form. You couldn't be bothered or didn't check through your app to make sure that it didn't have any mistakes in it, we need somebody who will recognise the mistakes they've made and improve upon them. Based off your first and second application, I believe we aren't looking for someone like you.[/color][/size]

[color=#00ffff][size=150]-1 Not a very long app and dont see you on at all.[/size][/color]

-1 Ron's 8 Harry Potter book basically sums everything up

[color=#ff0000]-1[/color] [color=#00ffff]I have only seen you on the server once. Ron basically said it all.[/color]

[color=#ee82ee][size=200]-1 what Ron said sums it up[/size][/color]

[color=#ff0000][size=300][b]Denied[/b][/size] [size=200]Sorry but your application has been denied. It seems you do not play as frequently anymore, sorry mate. If you wish to put forth the effort in your application you may in 7 days![/size][/color]